雅思寫(xiě)作：雙邊討論的范文分析

在我們的雅思寫(xiě)作學(xué)習(xí)中，我們首先要明白的是我們的文章結(jié)構(gòu)。我們的task2 大作文部分根據(jù)題目的最后一句話可以把題目分成五種類(lèi)型。而每種類(lèi)型都對(duì)應(yīng)不同的寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)。所以熟悉作文的不同寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)使我們寫(xiě)好作文的第一步。今天我們就這種雙邊討論類(lèi)型的結(jié)構(gòu)做一個(gè)講解。這類(lèi)作文本身就要求我們兩邊都要討論，并給出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，所以我們?cè)趯?xiě)的時(shí)候這3個(gè)部分都不能缺少。那我們?cè)趯?xiě)的過(guò)程中，到底應(yīng)該寫(xiě)幾段，每段安排什么內(nèi)容哪?我們今天就用劍橋9， test 3 的大作文部分做個(gè)講解。

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend One possible to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle.

Advocates of this believe that today’ s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time. If there were easy to-reach local sports centers, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening. The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories o PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.

However, there may be better ways of tackling this problem. Interest in sport is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not those who most need them. Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local council has done. This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.

As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health. Even improving public transport would help: it takes longer to walk to the bus stop than to the car.

In my opinion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would not have the desired results. People should be encouraged not only to be more physically active but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.

這篇作文在寫(xiě)的時(shí)候采用了五段式的寫(xiě)作方式。作者在開(kāi)頭的時(shí)候引出了話題，然后在第2段中先分析了增加sports center 的好處。在第3段和第4段中，作者又很快轉(zhuǎn)折到其它有用的方法，比如在公園中安裝運(yùn)動(dòng)設(shè)施或者對(duì)讓人們發(fā)胖的產(chǎn)品施加高的稅收懲罰。結(jié)尾段中，作者又總結(jié)了個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)，指出提高人們健康的方法其實(shí)有很多。

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